Being His Mate

Being His Mate

195K Reads 4.4K Votes 20 Part Story
Ironically_ By Ironically_ Completed

Valarie is broken. Her dad abuses her, her mom died of cancer and she has no one to got to. when she moves to a little town she meets a boy named Dylan. Dylan is rich and he is the towns bad boy. He tries to fix her but is he to late? Dylan might be hold a very important secret..

Once Val knows everything will Dylan be strong enough to keep Val safe and not just from her dad? Or will he break?

Use to be She Was Broken

  • beach
  • cake
  • dylan
  • forevermebeyourself
  • happy
  • love
  • loveoflife
  • smile
  • val
  • wedding
nomz22 nomz22 Jan 05, 2013
I love your characters and your storyline so mich, I definetly want to read on so good job , maybe just try to start off less of your sentences with I bbecause at the moment there are places when It reads a little like a list :) hope that helps xx
HaveFaith101 HaveFaith101 Nov 18, 2012
hey this story is good so far why dont you add a cast list since you have added images.
Ironically_ Ironically_ Apr 23, 2012
Hey!!! if i dedication a chapter to you that's my way of saying thank you for reading!! =)