im pregnant with my P.E teachers baby

im pregnant with my P.E teachers baby

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bmtgirl98 By bmtgirl98 Updated Feb 19, 2014

Neaveh is a country girl who lives In Fort Worth, Texas. Her father died so she has to live with her grandparents because her mother left her after her dad died. she's a quiet girl until she meets her gym teacher Mr. Jones/ Aiden. She sees Aiden at a friends party and has sex with him. a couple weeks later she ends out she is pregnant with his baby. Aiden is perfectly okay with it and stays with her. Everyone knows that Mr. Jones is the baby's daddy and they don't care. one day they go for a sonogram and finds out they are have twins. a boy and a girl. they are born perfectly healthy and adorable!

Having a tickle fight with chickens is what happened and we all know it
So two things, is this story in the present or past? Please choose one and stick to the proper words usage and the second is every time there is a different speaker don't forget to start a new paragraph and remember that you never have two quotation marks right next to each other. Love the story!
SkrillXMnite SkrillXMnite Jun 30, 2015
aww, you used explosivewafflezs name, Neveah, heaven spelt backwards. ❤