Eyes

Eyes

1 Part Story 19.9K Reads 780 Votes
Lullaby24441 By Lullaby24441 Completed

This is the first poem that I've written in a while, and it sort of conveys how I'm feeling right now.
And how many others must be feeling.
When I write down how I feel, it sort of helps.
And when I read something that conveys how I feel, that helps as well.
So this is for anyone who feels the same way.

Thanks for reading :)

skidsmom skidsmom Dec 06, 2013 03:22PM
Its you whom you the real you in which you long fir them to see.
laflaquita2016 laflaquita2016 Apr 15, 2013 07:51PM
It's very amazing and it made me realize that the poem is very real , than other poems .
wow. cool peom! im sure at there is one point in everyones lives that that feel like this...
selenalover786 selenalover786 Apr 12, 2013 02:27AM
This exactly how i feel yet every one thinks im living the life of my dreams
yes. that's what everyone feels. u put it in a very poetic way yet easy to comprehend. voted !
- - Apr 11, 2013 02:15PM
that was so beautifully written, the emotions are so real I couldn't help but relate to them