The Voultri has just left and Bella and Edward are together in peace but what about about their daughter and Jacob ? This is my Fan fiction how their love story will start :)Hope you all like it :D
Are Nessie, Bella, Edward, Jake and all of them are they the same people
Fix the sentences after the periods there's supposed to be a space!! But other than that it's great so far!!
short but still a great job can't wait to continue reading! :-)
Lmao in the movie she's all like U NICKNAMES MY DAUGHTER AFTER THE LOCH NESS MONSTER, now she loves the name
It's cool.I love it. Maybe you should publish it.I for a matter of fact know at least a 100 people who would buy it...
its fine for the first chapter and a great entrence for the book