Chat Mate (Editing)

Chat Mate (Editing)

3M Reads 61.5K Votes 38 Part Story
Kim Pavon By kimpyvon Completed

Kimberly Wales is the average type of person. She hates attention and most importantly, she hates Troy Milton! The most popular guy in school that is said to be a player and a bad boy. When her friends introduced her to the new trending chat site "chatmates.com," an unknown username "youdontknowwhoiam_18" started chatting her.

redfae redfae May 11
Lol did you mean vomiting or commenting. 
                              
                              I first read this and thought your were joking and that your story was so sickly sweet and romantic, that it made them sick but now realise it's a mistake.
redfae redfae May 11
He he, same repeated punctuation issue.  I think this might be your bad habit :)
So its a guy. I now have a feeling that you're sexist.
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Joke
I'm not a fan if junky I like mom's homemade food she's a good cook
redfae redfae May 11
Not sure on this one but probably should be ellipsis (...) at the end.
Phoenix073 Phoenix073 Aug 31, 2015
omg I just happened to stumble across this story and I thought it sounded interesting then I found out SELENA GOMEZ is the main character and now I'm definitely reading it CUZ IM A SELENATOR