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risky love(Being Slowly Rewritten)

risky love(Being Slowly Rewritten)

8.7K Reads 310 Votes 12 Part Story
nothing_personal By nothing_personal Updated Nov 06, 2010

WARNING: Being Slowly Rewritten. Read at your own risk

Alaina is your typical good girl. The caring girl everyone wants to be friends with. Unfortunately love hasn't treated her well. just about every boyfriend Alaina has had has cheated on her with her very own sister Layla even Brett.. the one she thought wouldn't hurt her.. New kids Nate and Hunter move in town seems like they each have the hots for Alaina, but is she ready for boys yet? Is she ready to move on from Brett? But is there also more to Nate and Hunter than what they let on? hmm guess it's up to you to find out

NightDefender NightDefender Mar 21, 2013
Omg my names Alaina!!! Eekk and really creepy is that my mom and dad look exactly what u describe to be
AnnieKR AnnieKR Nov 11, 2010
It's a good start, that's for sure :)
                              Advice?  Divide it into paragraphs and make sure you start a new line/paragraph every time someone new starts speaking :)
AmberNN AmberNN Oct 20, 2009
I like it a lot I wonder who walked into the class. I like how she doesn't try to wear the best clothes and look like a slut she just is her self :)
AmberNN AmberNN Oct 20, 2009
Hey there I got your message and am going to vote and comment on all of your stories. So far I like this :) The writing is nice and doesnt have a heap of spelling errors like a lot of them so far! I'm going to the next part ciao doll :)
All4UandOnlyU All4UandOnlyU Aug 13, 2009
Hey i have more posted of my story! i really like your so far!
nothing_personal nothing_personal Aug 12, 2009
pls cmmt n vute hope u like it don wrry it gets more intresting