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Beckly By Beckly Updated Feb 15, 2011

With the horrific story of his wife's death hanging over him, this Father must try to make all the right decisions for his daughter. But when things start to go wrong, will he be able to save her?

Purplepuddingpie Purplepuddingpie Feb 16, 2011
oooo i love it !!! i can't wait to find out what the problem is :)
Beckly Beckly Feb 16, 2011
@Niro-TheNovel Please could you point instances of "her" instead of "he"? I've gone back and checked but can't find any. Perhaps I'm too close to the story.
Beckly Beckly Feb 16, 2011
@Niro-TheNovel thank you, I will go back and check - I typed it all and just wanted to post it as soon as possible :-) And I'll check the rules on quotes - I'm not too clear myself, and make any adjustments. Thank you!
bluee_chalk bluee_chalk Feb 13, 2011
ahmazing story, I really like freddy's character for sum reason lol. hope you don't givin me some feedbak on my story pls?
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