Can't Help it!

Can't Help it!

818 Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
Shruti Agarwal By TheMaskedSoul Completed

A li'l incident which keeps happening-small read-but i'm sure u'll end smiling or sighing-gv it a go!

  • crush
  • girls
  • humour
  • love
  • shopping
  • shrutimettlesomeagarwal
CutePop CutePop May 14, 2011
I read the whole thing. Superlike it! Well, i didn't saw any mistakes type of thing! Actually, didn't tried to make out any kind of mistake or errors. Because what you wrote is just simply awesome and 'COOL'. :P
                              Like it. 
                              Keep Writing! :D
TheMaskedSoul TheMaskedSoul Apr 08, 2011
@ArvyNgoShuji-kun will someone here..help me find the errors...? god! this is gtng awkward!
ArvyNgoShuji-kun ArvyNgoShuji-kun Apr 08, 2011
The story was awesome, no doubt.
                              But there's tons of grammar errors, mostly about the sentences wording.
                              Aside from that, it was epic ^_^
                              Keep Writing ^_^
                              
TheMaskedSoul TheMaskedSoul Apr 08, 2011
@tianajade grammatical errors are something..I can't help.English is my second language..and I am not perfect in it..ofcourse..I try though..I try a lot...:D
                              wd u be a darling and point out the mistakes for me..?
                              PM if u can..thnks!
TenancyLoure-Terret TenancyLoure-Terret Mar 23, 2011
:D please upload soon, im already hooked 
                              you have some talent 
                              upload sooooonnnnnn pllllleeeeaaaasssseeee :D
                              ♥
ssirius-blackk ssirius-blackk Mar 09, 2011
Yeah, I agree with crystalrose14, keep an eye on grammar, but otherwise it's good!