A li'l incident which keeps happening-small read-but i'm sure u'll end smiling or sighing-gv it a go!
I read the whole thing. Superlike it! Well, i didn't saw any mistakes type of thing! Actually, didn't tried to make out any kind of mistake or errors. Because what you wrote is just simply awesome and 'COOL'. :P
Keep Writing! :D
@ArvyNgoShuji-kun will someone here..help me find the errors...? god! this is gtng awkward!
The story was awesome, no doubt.
But there's tons of grammar errors, mostly about the sentences wording.
Aside from that, it was epic ^_^
Keep Writing ^_^
@tianajade grammatical errors are something..I can't help.English is my second language..and I am not perfect in it..ofcourse..I try though..I try a lot...:D
wd u be a darling and point out the mistakes for me..?
PM if u can..thnks!
:D please upload soon, im already hooked
you have some talent
upload sooooonnnnnn pllllleeeeaaaasssseeee :D
Yeah, I agree with crystalrose14, keep an eye on grammar, but otherwise it's good!