Amaryllis

Amaryllis

2.4K Reads 197 Votes 11 Part Story
Fatima <3 By Fanta_xx Updated Oct 09, 2014

The water was clear, uncontaminated by substances that could kill. That was before she threw in a couple of small, white pills. There was a reaction, dissolving the pills and creating a mist in the water. The girl picked up the cup and brought it to her lips, she closed her eyes as she drank its contents.

Four hours, she thought, just four.

  • action
  • death
  • family
  • heart
  • heartbreak
  • horror
  • intruder
  • romance
  • teen
trixx28 trixx28 Aug 24, 2015
You'll probably not see this Faizana fizz lol but I know you're that dumb we go college together
Phuk_u Phuk_u Jul 28, 2014
@Fanta_xx no problem sweetie,  it looks very well written so I'm deffo adding it on my reading list!
Fanta_xx Fanta_xx Jul 27, 2014
@Phuk_u Thank you! And I hope you continue reading soon if you have the time. Your comments are very much valued
Fanta_xx Fanta_xx Jul 10, 2014
@LoveToWrite0089 Thank you so much! And I'll try to work on it. Do I add more description to the character, the scene, the overall situation or all of that? (or other?)
Fanta_xx Fanta_xx Jun 07, 2014
@IrishPsycho Imagine if unicorns tasted like fudge... Would it be animalistic to eat one? Especially since theyre rare
tobecontinu tobecontinu Jun 05, 2014
woah.
                              i was a little confused about if she is dead or not, and so if this is a dream, or afterlife, or what (because i'm not sure if she's still alive)
                              i really love your cliffhangers though :O wish i could do this. 
                              thank you so much for the dedication!! :)