Chivalry

Chivalry

118K Reads 2.4K Votes 24 Part Story
Valencia By Cocomonetxos Completed

Book One: Lady Vivianne accompanies her sister, Lady Olivia Belakane as a chaperone for the Lady Olivia first season in coming into society. In her fifth season.  Book Two : Lady Honoria

  • baron
  • baroness
  • duke
  • england
  • london
  • victorian
Agbeze Agbeze May 14
Na wa o! Reading this is enormously tasking. Please review ASAP and edit. If possible, use a simpler form of English.
RashmiVinayak RashmiVinayak Dec 27, 2015
it's verrrry difficult to read.... the grammar, diction, incomplete sentences are taking a toll on me....story has potential but needs a major makeover...
brpennworthy brpennworthy Jan 23, 2014
Hi, just as bgirlIsha says, it could have been a wonderful story if we could read past the bad syntax & grammar. Is it possible for you to get it edited? I assure you it will make a great change to your novel if you look into these issues.
Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Jul 28, 2013
@HerbanLegend Thanks for your feedback. I'll take note of it.
Cocomonetxos Cocomonetxos Jun 11, 2013
@Mother_of_Dragons Thank you, Very much . I so hope you continue. ( :
Navaara6 Navaara6 Jun 20, 2012
I really love how you've put the old fashioned words together and how you have used the words 'Lady', you can really picture what they'd look like and how they would speak to each other. In conclusion, fantastically put together. Good job! Really. Well done! :)