I'm Sorry.

I'm Sorry.

602 Reads 31 Votes 1 Part Story
~Dessy-Chan~ By desilisius Completed

A poem dedicated to myself.

smileygirl123 smileygirl123 Jun 13, 2012
I seriously like this poem, its just well amazing and it really does make you think about things when read. i must say, you're a good writer . Awesome poem:)
LessThanThree_ LessThanThree_ Jun 01, 2012
Reading this made me stop and reflect about my life. This is really relatable and I definitely enjoyed reading it. However there are some grammatical mistakes! I don't particularly like pointing out mistakes in poems so I'll leave that to you, if you want to that is. Good job! :)
EnlightenedSoul EnlightenedSoul Apr 21, 2012
I can practically feel the emotions jumping out of the page. Lovely poem indeed! :)
Impossible_Heart Impossible_Heart Apr 20, 2012
Good job. I don't find it good enough for a vote, but I am sure you will improve. Good luck.
LostInTheStereo98 LostInTheStereo98 Apr 20, 2012
@desilisius ....lolz...ur welcum....n yea...it lookz awesome!!!!    ^_^
desilisius desilisius Apr 20, 2012
@LostInTheStereo98 lolol thnkkksss!!!! :DDD and no, sadly i didnt draw that myself :o it looks good tho :3 thankss for ur comment ^-^