I'm Sorry.

I'm Sorry.

1 Part Story 599 Reads 31 Votes
~Dessy-Chan~ By desilisius Completed

A poem dedicated to myself.

smileygirl123 smileygirl123 Jun 13, 2012 09:15AM
I seriously like this poem, its just well amazing and it really does make you think about things when read. i must say, you're a good writer . Awesome poem:)
LessThanThree_ LessThanThree_ Jun 01, 2012 01:40PM
Reading this made me stop and reflect about my life. This is really relatable and I definitely enjoyed reading it. However there are some grammatical mistakes! I don't particularly like pointing out mistakes in poems so I'll leave that to you, if you want to that is. Good job! :)
I can practically feel the emotions jumping out of the page. Lovely poem indeed! :)
Good job. I don't find it good enough for a vote, but I am sure you will improve. Good luck.
@desilisius ....lolz...ur welcum....n yea...it lookz awesome!!!!    ^_^
desilisius desilisius Apr 20, 2012 06:25PM
@LostInTheStereo98 lolol thnkkksss!!!! :DDD and no, sadly i didnt draw that myself :o it looks good tho :3 thankss for ur comment ^-^