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1K Reads 64 Votes 4 Part Story
Hanna <3 By honeypooh Updated Jul 15, 2012

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JustAnotherHijabi JustAnotherHijabi Jun 23, 2012
I like how you've started this story, it has a very nice flow to it,  and your writing style is BEAUTIFUL!!!! Do keep on uploading, I'll be looking out.
TheHarriesTwins_1D TheHarriesTwins_1D May 18, 2012
This is really good, your a great writer! please continue with this story and upload soon :) :)
BlurryWords BlurryWords May 10, 2012
This is a great start. The plot is certainly interesting. I want to know more about Carter and whether he'll manage to find Izzie and how they knew each other and got to know each other. It's a great start, very original.
SpacerX SpacerX May 06, 2012
Wow. Intersting. That little boy (hide and seek) Seems creepy and I'm assuming he will come into play soon. Nice job!!
angela98 angela98 Apr 30, 2012
This story looks very promising to me.....I like the onion part! I think there are a few paragraphs which you break into two..... Other than that, really good start :D
honeypooh honeypooh Apr 28, 2012
@XtrainwreckX Thank u! Pls comment and vte if u lyk it
                               Upload ur stry soon too! It's great