Well... Who wants him first?

Well... Who wants him first?

14.2K Reads 304 Votes 14 Part Story
Tinarra By tinny3038 Updated Nov 10, 2012

Noah Nikopol, Once a loner nerd, Now a Gorgeous Spanish God.  Noah once lived in Australia, with his Mother and older sister, but was sent away to live with his Father Over in the States. 

when Noah's father is sent on a business trip, Noah has to live with his mother once again but he is not alone, for he has come with his adopted brother Gabriel who is just as gorgeous  as Noah

Now coming back, Noah has to face the many reason why he left in the first place, one being his sister Ashley and her cult of Botox Barbies.  Aside from one, Sam… she is Ashley’s most trusted friend, and the one who befriended Noah before he left, Does Sam harbour feelings for Noah even when she is Ashley's friend?

Melissa is Noah’s best friend who works at a café called High Top, she has been in love with Noah since their first meeting, but has kept it under wraps, and eventually got over him over the years… but when he appears once more in his Gorgeous glory, will Melissa fall for him once again?

One of the two girls, Loves him but the other Lusts him… can you pick, which is which?

The choice is yours…

HypnosG HypnosG Mar 21, 2013
isn't 7"1' too tall? that's pretty huge i think 6"1' would be better. just a suggestion though. I think your story has a great start so far
roxabara roxabara Jul 04, 2012
i am guessing SAM IS THE ONE THAT LIKE NOAH AND THE OTHER ONE HAS LUST HAHA which isn't bad at all i like sam
annabelle12 annabelle12 Jul 24, 2010
@kaytiebean Yeah, I have to agree with that. I don't like when they do thet either. But love the story so far!
xxIHateLuvStorysxx xxIHateLuvStorysxx Jul 05, 2010
Hahahahhaaaa!! This is madd hilariouss!! And I love itt!! <3
kaytiebean kaytiebean Jun 11, 2010
i don't like it when guys date girls older than them
                              *cough sam and noah cough cough*
SuffocatingQuietly SuffocatingQuietly Apr 21, 2010
i really lyk this story but i would've loved to read bout the transition :D