Nikki Evans and Janine Anderson are BFF's. That kind of friends that are freakishly alike. But it all changes when Janine turns over to the dark side.
Who is Jake? And what is wrong with Nikki's twin brother Fred?
Your title, it's not a question so what's up with the question mark. You need to use actual written numbers when writing numbers that are less than ten. You also need to correct and better your spelling and it's just missing something. so there's my critique.
haha ! I like the beginning and the reality behind the thoughts ,but yeah capitals can cause an issue.
Good work : )
Aww poor Miriam! It's funny, yet sad at the same time what happened to her haha.
Good story either way. But lessen on the capitals.
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Come on, keep writing... Now I wanna know more about that hot guy...
Let me guess, he'll be the reason to kill the ex-bestie, huh?
Makes me wonder what else the two girls have to hide...
And why is she yelling for a big sister?
But seems to become an interesing story... Keep on going.