'Hey Andrea' Don't be scared, It's just me...Your stalker.'
I screamed. He's here, after all the stalking and anonymous phone calls, he's arrived.
I have a stalker.
He's here and there's no turning back.
Why would he tie her up loosely and not expect her to free herself
U have to make paragraphs.its too cnfusing and and the reader looses where they were up to
I think that this is a good start but I think it rushes too quickly into things
Wow. Just stated reading this. Has my blood pumping, and has a lot of meaning and stuff cx. Seems a little rushed out, but it's pretty good. I like it.
Enjoyed the story, I just wished he had stalked her more before the kidnap xoxo