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The Phantom

The Phantom

243K Reads 10.2K Votes 36 Part Story
˗ˏˋ el  ˎˊ˗ By Nashoba Completed

phan·tom
ˈfan(t)əm/
  
       i. a person who is perceived as a ghost or a figment of the imagination

      ii. the person was who saved Tony Stark's life one day. No name, no face, no voice, no anything, just a simple figure in New York that happened to be in the right place, at the right time.

[Rated PG-13 for mild violence and swearing]
[HEAVILY REEDITING/REWRITING]

CrescentMoonXIII CrescentMoonXIII Mar 12, 2016
The ending seemed incredibly rushed and underdeveloped. It was too fast and not a lot of explaining. It answered a few questions as to who Skylar was, but it only created more. All-in-all, it was too confusing.
thelittlelam_ thelittlelam_ Nov 19, 2015
Wow. Your copyright thingamajig (whoa that's a word) is spot on. It's as if it really was made by a pro publisher
Slybandit Slybandit Jun 23, 2015
Yeah I'm kinda lost and the names are difficult for me at least
LadyofHeroes LadyofHeroes Jun 21, 2015
Damnnnn even I can't write a copyright as good as that.  
                              
                              My way: list things that don't belong to me and things that do belong to me.
                              
                              Or for a school project in St to add a little somethiny something I would just write all rights reserved or add the copyright sign OUO
-scooter- -scooter- Apr 22, 2015
I would liked her to show more of her powers and character development also flashbacks but more maybe of a out of body view of jade and noabe (sp?) thanks!