This sonnet was written as a metaphor for my divorce, which was very painful.
Very expressive, and excellent vocabulary. I love anything with the use of 'thy' and 'thou'. vtd
You were right, this is a little dark, but still I like the way the story progresses and holds together.
@TheNimesa I hope you do not feel the "blade" too deeply, smile. Thank you very much for digging back into my works; it is appreciated. Olan
@CottonJones no need for hints, Olan--just ask, lol , and I will be more than happy to read your buried treasures. ~)K
Had to dig deep to find this one, my friend, but I am glad I did. A sharply crafted sonnet on a painful subject matter, but you handled it with grace. The metaphor works so well--The last line is particularly poignant . excellent . ~)K
@CottonJones ~~When I get mine finished, I hope to run it by you! ;~)