Sonnet No. V:  Guillotine

Sonnet No. V: Guillotine

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Olan Smith By CottonJones Completed

This sonnet was written as a metaphor for my divorce, which was very painful.

enunciated- enunciated- Oct 02
Very expressive, and excellent vocabulary. I love anything with the use of 'thy' and 'thou'. vtd
raggedclown raggedclown Jan 03, 2015
You were right, this is a little dark, but still I like the way the story progresses and holds together.
CottonJones CottonJones Mar 27, 2013
@TheNimesa I hope you do not feel the "blade" too deeply, smile. Thank you very much for digging back into my works; it is appreciated. Olan
knightwriter knightwriter Jun 23, 2012
@CottonJones no need for hints, Olan--just ask, lol ,  and I will be more than happy to read your buried treasures.  ~)K
knightwriter knightwriter Jun 23, 2012
Had to dig deep to find this one, my friend,  but I am glad I did.  A sharply crafted sonnet on a painful subject matter, but you handled it with grace.  The metaphor works so well--The last line is particularly poignant .  excellent .  ~)K
Amuse-bouche Amuse-bouche Mar 17, 2012
@CottonJones ~~When I get mine finished, I hope to run it by you!  ;~)