Shake it up! Break the system (On hold)

Shake it up! Break the system (On hold)

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Jade By PassingStrange Updated Jul 09, 2010

Designer babies? We make 'em. Kids that think there is ''no rules'' but are actually on a tight leash? We control 'em. And a couple of "LEVELS?" We kill them. So let us start with the first one, with level zero.
Zero has no memory of her past and when strange things start happening she begins to question everything she has ever known. She realizes that the world she knows is actually a lie and the only way to save everyone is to go to the man who caused all of her problems, Greyhound.
She then must try to over power him without giving herself away and "awakening" the others like her. Will she be able to do it or will time run out?

(on hold, maybe forever, if you wish to finish this story PM me)

PassingStrange PassingStrange Jun 30, 2010
@xowritergirl14xo :D it's all about the fans not the fact that your coming close to writing porn for children
xowritergirl14xo xowritergirl14xo Jun 28, 2010
hahah oh definitely! I'll be sure to take your comment into consideration! maybe I'll rewrite all of my books and just have sex scenes in them?! hahah whataya think?!
PassingStrange PassingStrange Jun 28, 2010
@xowritergirl14xo
                              thanks! I like your stories too they are very well writen.
                              Though (I mean this jokingly) it would be better if they had hot guys and sex scenes every chapter. Since that such good writing skills
xowritergirl14xo xowritergirl14xo Jun 28, 2010
very gripping and intriguing! a vote for you! keep up the good work! it's great! i'm hooked! check out my stories?!