First Impression (A Shadow Maven Paranormal)

First Impression (A Shadow Maven Paranormal)

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Pauline Creeden By PaulineCreeden Updated Feb 16, 2014

Chira Kelly thought she didn’t need anyone…until she met Ben. 

Because of one ugly rumor, Chira lives as an outcast at her school. Which is fine with her, because she works better alone. Always has, always will. And at least she has her one and only true friend, Tasha. When Tasha insists that they join a group to visit a possibly haunted abandoned old schoolhouse, she's wary, but joins her friend. Because of that decision, their lives are in jeopardy as a malevolent spirit targets the group. Tragedies and accidents pick them off one by one, and Chira finds herself drawn to the one person who can see the truth. But can he protect her?

violettexskies violettexskies Feb 09, 2014
Wow. I love all the description and can really get a good peek into her life, and I'm so scared for Tasha. And I love how the ghost girl seems surprised to see them too, unless I'm a little cray cray and misread your story.