Fight or Flight [On Hold]

Fight or Flight [On Hold]

5 Part Story 682 Reads 36 Votes
gempearl By gempearl Updated Jul 30, 2012

They say that we're born with either a fight or flight response: when we panic, we'll either stay and fight or run away. It's programmed into our DNA and there's nothing we can do to change it.
This was Lexy's fight or flight - stay and talk it out or run away. She'd always thought she'd be more of a fight kind of girl, but until that moment, she'd really had no idea.

AflyingMonkey AflyingMonkey Jun 25, 2012 07:30AM
I like this story and you deserve points for giving me this cookie. *Noms*
@gempearl ohh I re-read it and now I get what you mean. When he told her he was sorry and she thought that she would be just as addicted as he was when "it" happened
You have great dialogue! Haha... i suck at dialogue :( anyway, your description is also really good, and your characters and their relations are well thought out :) i didn't see any errors so thats always good!
                              
                              Voted!
gempearl gempearl Jun 24, 2012 04:57PM
@xxLastSummerxx Thankyou! That's really nice of you to say^.^
                              @BoredWriterForever Thankyou! And yes, I find third person a lot harder but otherwise I end up blabbing too much. I'm a little bit confused, what didn't you get?:)
xxLastSummerxx xxLastSummerxx Jun 24, 2012 04:47PM
The descriptions are very well done, and the characters have well thought traits. It makes the story very enjoyable! I will definitely be reading on. Great job!
savvyjack savvyjack Jun 24, 2012 04:45PM
This a was an excellent first chapter! I definitely want to keep reading:) the description was great and the characters are soo real! You have a nice writing style and overall it was written very well! Good job and keep up the good work:)