Life of an alpha's mate did i mention he's my step brother!!

Life of an alpha's mate did i mention he's my step brother!!

734K Reads 10K Votes 30 Part Story
Jazz Tayla By JazzTayla Completed

Mimi is the only teenager in her pack who hasn't found her mate but when that changes is it a good thing??

*Edited version on my page, called Life Before The Alpha*

Im scared already 😯😯😯 But sounds like a gr8 book😊😊😊😊
aka_47_ aka_47_ Dec 09, 2016
I am really confused. I thought that mimi and Diego were gonna be mates
IAmCandi IAmCandi Sep 23, 2014
But if Mimi and Diego are the sibs, then wing she and he be the ones without their mates yet?.... I agree with^^^^. This is a but confusing already
justlauraaa justlauraaa Sep 14, 2014
The title is so long like just leave it at the word mate and your story will be a lot more attractive
OctoberRaine OctoberRaine Nov 02, 2011
this is a little confusing because you switch tenses a lot. Also, when you write a number under 100 your supposed to spell it out. However, this is a really good start.
thecoffeekid thecoffeekid Feb 09, 2011
really good way to get people to read on  :)
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                              thnxx would mean a lot even though they are probably not as good as yours :)