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Legend of the Dragon Riders

Legend of the Dragon Riders

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Bethany By bethany_333 Updated Apr 29, 2015

Every one hundred years five guys all over the world are chosen between the ages of 17 and 21 to become dragon riders. They are chosen to rise above the dark five that try to wreak havoc and to destroy anything that is good in the world. The only thing that was differnt about this generation of riders was that the first time in 5000 years an 18 year old girl names Alex Leewood has been chosen by a dragon to stand by it's side and fight in the war. what makes her so special that this dragon would choose her? And will she be strong enough to defend the world of its evil?

I believe you created this very obvious. It's a little cliche but that could just be because I've read this kind of story before
J05132007 J05132007 4 days ago
I seriously love it you should make a new chapter please 😢please
I'm not far it. But, it could be good to develop the character more. Just for the fact that even the toughest people have someone their nice to. It could have more people like her character with a mix of spunk and a touch of gentle. Be careful trying to create the balance though. It can be tough
This feels a little sloppy. Her character is most likely a stock character but the "it couldn't hurt" isn't well done. Perhaps find a way to reword it
Oh my god that was a good twist with it being a girl, write more it's good
Why_Is_Life_A_Bitch Why_Is_Life_A_Bitch Dec 16, 2016
My sister is the years younger and that height. She's also 150 not 110.