The vampire's bride

The vampire's bride

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Kara By wearestars9 Updated Mar 21, 2014

Meet Aria night  And her last name it's what she is living in darkness .  She has been locked In a cell since age 5 she has seen sunshine very few times in her life she is 18 . you think how dose she know this well the people who hold her here are very organized they put a calender in her cell . She doesn't know who an why they keep her the only person she see's is an old lady who brings her food in the morning and night .     Do you believe in vampire's  ? Hope you like it !      [ yes their will be a few misspelled words in here ]

hold up, she says that she thought that the sun was supposed to be yellow and bright and not purple and dark. How does she know what color it is if she's never seen the sun. I also found a lot of grammatical errors, such as not putting the periods in the right place. This was hard to read.
Mo_Linguish Mo_Linguish Mar 17, 2015
If she has a window, why hasn't she seen the sun all those years?
I_Am_A_Dreamer0 I_Am_A_Dreamer0 Dec 06, 2014
@SmilesNsunshines  i agree with you but again just pointing it out