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Lively Distractions

Lively Distractions

1.9K Reads 50 Votes 2 Part Story
Lindy! By TaintedDaisies Updated Feb 19, 2011

Violet used to be your go to gal. Parties? She was the life of them. School? Straight A's. Boys? Do you even have to ask? Violet had her life laid out for her until the car accident. With no family left in her big city life of NYC, Violet is shipped off to a small redneck town in Georgia. With a new home, new family, new school, Violet had no idea life could be so hard.

ashnicole96 ashnicole96 Jun 06, 2012
Oh gosh. That last sentence... is her mom gonna die!? Definitely makes me want to continue reading.
                              
                              There are a ton of errors in this, but it wouldn't take a lot to clean them up. Just watch your tenses and work on the spacing. It looks like a really great start!
Neo200120018 Neo200120018 Aug 20, 2011
I like but the summary drew me in more than the start. But I get it I've been there lol but I had breakstuff playing lol
ACRL37 ACRL37 May 15, 2011
The last line sounds ominous lol...it's a good start though! =) Nice job! 
LittlePurple88 LittlePurple88 Mar 09, 2011
I really like it!! I can't believe it hasn't had hundreds of thousands of readers!! You should keep going!
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 23, 2011
it's nice, you might wanna shorten your paragraphs though.!
                              
Bloodynewmoon Bloodynewmoon Feb 21, 2011
The dialogue could use some work, but otherwise it's pretty good. owob