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The Mansion Game (Watty Awards '11!)

The Mansion Game (Watty Awards '11!)

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Tasha By Superstition13 Updated Aug 09, 2011

Stevie (Female) is thrown into a full sized mansion with eight other kids born on the exact same date as her. The mansion is full socked with food and is a teenage paradise. Why are they here? To play The Mansion Game. The Mansion Game has one goal; survive. It's kill or be killed.
Soon the mansion is full of killing and who's at the top of the food chain; Stevie. 
But there's one small problem for Stevie his name is Sam.
A story of betrayal, mystery and love, of course ;)

Blueprints_ Blueprints_ Nov 26, 2013
That sentence u said to give a suggestion on? Well, I have an idea :)
                              "I knew she was worried about my lack of social interaction with people" 
                               Tell me if u liked it, but don't mind if u didn't ;)
Superstition13 Superstition13 May 11, 2011
                              Were did it say 'then I woke up' or 'I jumped out of bed'? She didnt wake up, she was in her room. 
                              And the kiddnapping is used often but how else was I supposed to do it? She just prances into the mansion...
Superstition13 Superstition13 Feb 23, 2011
                              I looked and they are only similar. I swear I have never heard of you before this point in time. I didn't steal you idea. This book was inspired by a dream. X my <3
tianajade tianajade Feb 13, 2011
An OK beginning (: It needs more description and emotion though, and it's a little fast paced. It's a good start, though and it's a really interesting and different story line, which is good! It sounds great. Keep writing!
Pratibha_Saxena Pratibha_Saxena Feb 11, 2011
Jesus Christ!! Freakishly-Scary!!! That guy really sucks at giving birthday presents!!! :P 
                              To do something like that on ones birthday.. so I'm thining, everones gonna die?? That will be soo sad... :( 
                              Interesting story!!! 
                              You've captured my mind.. :P
Pratibha_Saxena Pratibha_Saxena Feb 11, 2011
I'm not sure about the names but OMG!! That poor kid!!! Coffins?? I hate closed spaces... 
                              The storys got me hooked, I'm glad you told me to read it...