Hots for my captain

Hots for my captain

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Sheena Patrick By SheenaPatrick Updated Jul 29, 2014

Two best friends and team mates are gay for each other but are having trouble telling the other the truth

You need help with you writing!  The point of each sentence is to make sure the audience understands! It's sounds like a great story but I am having trouble understanding it! It's hard to follow so get some help with grammar and I will edit if you like - no chatge💜
Need a little help with your grammar so say each sentence out loud to yourself!