Book 1 of The Royals: A Royal Secret (Slowly Rewriting)

Book 1 of The Royals: A Royal Secret (Slowly Rewriting)

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Brielle Angel By bri1128 Completed

Victoria Collins's life is like every other teenage girl's in America, up until her parents let out a secret they should have told her years ago. A secret so big that it could change her entire life. Victoria will have to completely change if she is ever going to fit in in the world this secret brings, along with figuring out answers to questions she's had her whole life. The one thing she is certain about is she - or many other people - won't come out unscathed.

Warning: Some things may not make sense because I am currently editing and changing some things.

(Cover by @_awkwardlyy)

Really good chapter, we'll written. I am really enjoying the book so far. Very mysterious. Could it be she and Josh really arebsiblings-twins and end up at the same school?
Alex3025 Alex3025 Aug 04
I'm the same way when we had to read Animal Farm,Lord of the flys and one other I can't remember at the moment....😘
The Great Gatsby was a bit tedious to read. But Oliver Twist by Charles Dickenson was great!
MajaDiana MajaDiana Jul 25, 2014
I like the premise. But there's a small tense blip. "Decide" should be "decided". Onward I go :)
cookiespink1 cookiespink1 Jun 24, 2014
When Tory wants to know where they (her parents) are sending her she actually hasn't heard anything about leaving. You might want to add in another snippet of dialogue right before so readers don't confused.
Morri-Ella Morri-Ella Jun 22, 2014
This is good! Some bits better than others, and vice versa. But I think it's nice. ^^