Perfect Little People

Perfect Little People

8K Reads 219 Votes 18 Part Story
Kenna By makennaa1 Updated Sep 02, 2014

Elizabeth Parker has just recently moved from shadowy Colorado to sunny California. She was never the 'Big Shot' back home and so when she makes it to LA High in the middle of her 10th grade year and isn't that sweet, little invisible girl anymore, she slowly becomes the girl she always envied; Bold and Self-Confident.   But, what happens when she finally is happy with her life and her boyfriends jealous ex-girlfriend gets into the picture? Jealousy can lead to many things, but every so often, it can lead people to death.

  • beach
  • california
  • drama
  • kid
  • love
  • mystery
  • new
  • pg-13
  • romance
  • teenage
tbharmony tbharmony Mar 21, 2014
Really Good but you need someone to edit over story,but overall really good.
Evelyndangerfield Evelyndangerfield Feb 24, 2014
Very authentic dialogue, I can really hear her teenage voice...