Hide and Seek

Hide and Seek

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the Million-Eyed Monster By ForxThexWin Updated Feb 08, 2011

A young child trapped in a word of unfair pain, could that be you? This poem is about child abuse and how it makes the victims feel. It's scary and unfair and it's my hope that you keep the emotions from this with you and help anyone, friend or not, who is being abused. Stop this maddness.

Wow that was really powerful I loved it a lot. I'm definitely adding books to my library you should continue writing 😊
ForxThexWin ForxThexWin Aug 13, 2012
@chemicalnoise thank you for your comment!
                              @JoshuaBurton thank you. i hope your friends are liing a better life :) thanks for the vote
lilium1223 lilium1223 Aug 13, 2012
Thanks so much for writing this poem. You're a hero and you're really brave. Alot of my close friends were abused. You're a really great poet. *Vote*
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Aug 09, 2012
This was visually heartbreaking but also  thoughtful and profoundly dark and introspective.
LessThanThree_ LessThanThree_ Mar 15, 2012
Woah this is really amazing. Literally took my breath away! The last stanza especially. Just... Woah. LOVED IT!!!
ForxThexWin ForxThexWin Mar 08, 2012
@ClaudineVV @ClaudineVV lol thanks XD i'm glad you liked it!