I'm Dying, Mate.

40 Part Story 673K Reads 8.9K Votes
Norie Tanabe By norieiswild Updated 2 years ago
--in Serious Editing it might have some extra chapters added so stay tune-- iona is dying in one year after 3 months she visited her uncle only to stay there permanently because she has no choice, her uncle wants to keep her alive and he searches for her mate but he failed. but iona already saw the TWO of them and they rejects her what will she do then when there is no hope on living anymore? No more hope to survive this disease, No more time to witness everything that is wonderful in the world.
Her tanned skin... Was overly pale? Then she would just be pale. That's an oxymoron.
12 months= a year so 3 months into the year gives her 9 months to live
truthfully the entire story could use some editing. it says it's edited but there are still quite a few stops that aren't right. I'm not being mean or ride just honest. and on a note of honesty I like your stories.
Ok I am loving this story, the plot and characters are well developed.  There are still some issues with words left out that is needed to make it read smoother BUT THAT SAID--the story already has me crying my eyes out and I am still reading it because it is a wonderful story!!!
This is edited?? There are a lot of run on sentences and missing words.
I cried while reading this. This story is really worth a try. I just read the first chapter and I really loved it<3