Taken at 17

Taken at 17

105K Reads 2.5K Votes 24 Part Story
Temporary_Forever00 By Temporary_Forever00 Updated Jun 05

"He held me in his muscular arms tightly as he fell asleep and snuggled up against me. I lied awake in his arms silently crying to myself about what just happened, but no time to cry, now's my chance".
Kendall is a 17 year old high school soccer player. One day after a heated argument with her mothers boyfriend, Eric, she leaves the house to cool off....but things take a turn for the worse.

QueenLibra- QueenLibra- Mar 15
Did you just call the man that kidnapped you hot? Smacks forehead
Loving this chapter already- I wonder why they would've kidnapped her.. I think it has something to do with eric- grr
thecollisionofstars thecollisionofstars Nov 29, 2015
This story is awesome! But you might want to work on your grammar a bit. And I kind of felt like the ending part (where she was getting kidnapped) was rushed, so maybe you could work on that? Just giving some helpful advice :)
LynetteS98 LynetteS98 Jul 15, 2014
I love how the story starts right away! Good job for your first time
Utsukushii_Hotaru Utsukushii_Hotaru Feb 10, 2014
This book is amazing! Not lieing one bit! Thanks for the comment on my message board and the complement, the rate and the follow :)