You left me, You came back, but what if i moved on?

You left me, You came back, but what if i moved on?

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Nayeli a.k.a nellie! By bookgirl479 Updated Jun 05, 2011

Bianca has been through the most devasting heartbreak of her life at 16.He left her. And by him i mean Jerald.She's 18 now and it's her senior year. It's been 2 years since she last heard of him. Jerald is 18 now and has come back for her. He regrets ever leaving her. But what if she's moved on? Is it true? Has she really moved on? Or is she just trying to covince herself of that?Her borfriend Randy isn't to happy about this either but what will he do?He says he loves her but does he love her enough to know what's good for her?

Ridelova101 Ridelova101 Jun 21, 2011
This is really good! I like it so far! Voted and adding to library!
tianajade tianajade Feb 08, 2011
An alright beginning (:
                              
                              Maybe a little more description would be good. A few grammar errors here and there that need fixing, and make sure your 'I's' are always capitalised. 
                              
                              A good start though, keep writing!