Balancing Act

25 Part Story 46.2K Reads 957 Votes
Zoey By gemaka Updated 2 years ago
Last year Halle Pearson was violated by her ex boyfriend Tyler Martin, in the school bathroom. She was saved by her brothers best friend Cole Waters. He's the only person who knows.  She can't focus on anything in school, but ballet. Her friends are getting frustrated with her not being there, and her dysfunctional family weighs heavily on her shoulders. Her whole world seems to be crumbling around her. But Cole, offers to help her get through it. After a few times of just talking, she already feels better. And she also finds herself falling for him.
This is really good! Your description and wording was so well described. And I pictured the scene at the dinner table like a movie. Really well detailed! :)
I'm super excited because this is ballet and I do ballet! Glad to know we also have another Cheerleader on Wattpad!! I have highschool tryouts starting next Friday :-)
Woh. Uber intense. Love-love-loved it.
                                    Voted and into my library :)
Excellent! The plot is awesome and I love how you started the story. It's slightly cliche but the Ballet part takes away most of it. Most stories like this would've started with a flashback and I'm glad you didn't. Great start. Voted! ^_^
Excellent start, you deal with some very tough and real issues that it really brings home a visceral feeling. You can certainly write well in first person!
This is an amazing start. Added to library already and I plan on reading it all when I can fully appreciate it :) I don't want to rush it. VOTED XD