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Balancing Act

Balancing Act

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Zoey By gemaka Updated Mar 30, 2013

Last year Halle Pearson was violated by her ex boyfriend Tyler Martin, in the school bathroom. She was saved by her brothers best friend Cole Waters. He's the only person who knows.  She can't focus on anything in school, but ballet. Her friends are getting frustrated with her not being there, and her dysfunctional family weighs heavily on her shoulders. Her whole world seems to be crumbling around her. But Cole, offers to help her get through it. After a few times of just talking, she already feels better. And she also finds herself falling for him.

BleuEvon BleuEvon May 05, 2013
This is really good! Your description and wording was so well described. And I pictured the scene at the dinner table like a movie. Really well detailed! :)
gemaka gemaka Apr 02, 2013
@LostMinds  Awesome, I am so jealous!:) I did ballet, but my mom wouldn't let me after I got to pointe:( Good luck at try outs!
LostMinds LostMinds Apr 02, 2013
I'm super excited because this is ballet and I do ballet! Glad to know we also have another Cheerleader on Wattpad!! I have highschool tryouts starting next Friday :-)
ashlee_larsen ashlee_larsen Apr 02, 2013
Woh. Uber intense. Love-love-loved it.
                              Voted and into my library :)
moonchic moonchic Feb 18, 2013
Excellent! The plot is awesome and I love how you started the story. It's slightly cliche but the Ballet part takes away most of it. Most stories like this would've started with a flashback and I'm glad you didn't. Great start. Voted! ^_^
TomPowter TomPowter Feb 01, 2013
Excellent start, you deal with some very tough and real issues that it really brings home a visceral feeling. You can certainly write well in first person!