Mums The Word

Mums The Word

3.7K Reads 116 Votes 6 Part Story
FaultyStars By FaultyStars Updated Jul 08, 2011

Secrets...
Everyone has them. 
Some are worse than others. 
Some you will take with you to the grave, others you can't help but share.
Some are dangerous others not so much.
Some will take over your life .. others you just might forget.
An interesting topic aren't they?
Secrets...

Astrid Fuentes has a secret that is slowly eating away at her soul. Coming to terms with it seems impossible so she runs away. This would be a lot easier if her train of thought would stop taking her back to it. Her sarcastic humour and unique view on life draw a select few towards her but can she handle being close? What happens when her secret begins connecting to different parts of her life as she struggles to move on? How will people react when they find out about her past and discover this terrible secret that will not stay hidden?  

Poor Astrid, she can run but she can’t hide…

NoMe12 NoMe12 Apr 19, 2011
everything that @silly-sophie said it what i was thinking. its absolutely wonderful i love it
silly-sophie silly-sophie Apr 07, 2011
LOVE THE BEGINNING!
                              You did a really good job with the inner monologue too! And the titles heaps catchy, kind of one of those titles that you see and go 'OH! THAT SOUNDS GREAT! REEEAAAD!'
                              loved it! you're an awesome writer. very mysterious, very eloquent. LOVED IT ! <3
                              xoxo
                              sophie
Stupid_CupiD Stupid_CupiD Mar 05, 2011
hahah love it !! I can so relate to astrid as for now xD voted going ahead :P
example-dun-think-so example-dun-think-so Mar 02, 2011
the character's so real. This is seriously an amazing start! :)
- - Feb 25, 2011
Good job. This could be really funny. I loved your description, it reminded me of Pretty Little Liars. Keep writing.
huntergirl huntergirl Feb 24, 2011
I dont get why is isnt normal? Great story few grammer errors but good detailed