Fallen

Fallen

752 Reads 15 Votes 7 Part Story
Dijah By darknightstagelights Updated Feb 13, 2011

Fall is an average girl going through average teenage stages. Such as, high school, drama, and friendships. But what she didn't know was the one DNA strand within her that was slightly wound tighter than the students' around her caused her to be within a whole different realm. Of course, fourteen year old Fall doesn't realize just how dangerous this little DNA strand and her newfound ability might just be -- and what dark turns await her.

Mangalex Mangalex Mar 05, 2011
Great start! I like the development of Fall and establishing her situation and personality. (: Can't wait to read the rest!
darknightstagelights darknightstagelights Mar 05, 2011
@ImTaken Well, thanks for the input, Ian. Wasn't exactly necessary, but whatever. (: And nobody can wait for your story, Spekle. Hurry!
                              
                              -Fall <3
iamtheeleventh iamtheeleventh Feb 23, 2011
seniorita hildalgo did you think of that on the spot; that was so sterotypical
iamtheeleventh iamtheeleventh Feb 23, 2011
@Spekle yeah speckle is going to write im throwing confetti bits everywhere :D.
                              cant wait :)
Spekle Spekle Feb 20, 2011
I am trying to write a story right now but I'll read passed chapter 3 soon! I just got finished with chapter 2 and was inspired to write! Woot woot! 
PlumMoonbeamDelight PlumMoonbeamDelight Feb 15, 2011
I like the fact you actually write how actual people would feel. Some stories write about someones life like it's not. 
                              
                              Great work!!!