Elusive Fate ~MAJOR EDITING~

Elusive Fate ~MAJOR EDITING~

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DandereChan By DandereChan Completed

++++Currently editing, edited chapters have capitalized titles++++
The voices inside my head are telling me to kill you, that I can’t stop them. I need to find out why, and how, I can stop them before it’s too late and I lose you.

I couldn’t figure out what to do, my hands were trembling, shivers going up and down my spine. I held the knife it was poised above him. My hands had a firm grip holding it tightly. I plunged it down, deep into his body, killing him instantly.

DandereChan DandereChan Dec 22, 2011
@justdidit Thanks I am editing this so it wil be much different  I have to do tones of research and editing "sigh" anyways when I think this is really good I am going to publish it on www.createspace.com :))))
LetMeWriteIt LetMeWriteIt Dec 21, 2011
The first paragraph really grabbed my attention! And I love the way you set out the sentences when she was losing consciousness! Fantastic :)
DandereChan DandereChan May 15, 2011
This a soon to be book when its finished I will get a bunch of people and to edit it and put it on www.createspace.com
Lovegood Lovegood May 08, 2011
I would appreciate it if you kept my 'Cover by Lovegood' on the cover i made for you, after all the cover is by ME, Lovegood and it took a lot of time and effort, and it would be nice if you could actually acknowledged that.