The Ghosts of Dark Hollow (Featured!)

The Ghosts of Dark Hollow (Featured!)

2.5K Reads 375 Votes 39 Part Story
Regina Saint Claire By exlibrisregina Completed

A series of violent ghost attacks terrorize a rural community at the same time a wealthy stranger arrives from Europe to reclaim his family estate. Hannah Gares, a sensitive teen, finds herself inexplicably drawn to the mysteries surrounding him.

Formerly titled 'Wispy Hollow.' Featured paranormal story.

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  • creepy
  • eerie
  • featured
  • ghost
  • ghosts
  • gothic
  • haunted
  • hauntedmansion
  • hauntings
  • mystery
  • paranormal
  • romance
  • scary
  • smalltowns
  • supernatural
  • suspense
  • teenfiction
  • wattys
  • youngadult
I can't remember if I read this story or got half-way through it, but who freaking cares, the writing is wonderful and this first chapter only makes me wants to read more.
KenPoirier KenPoirier Sep 13
I would say, just pick one and go with. Dress or gown. The whole narrator not sure thing draws the reader out of the story, which is the opposite of what you want to do when a scene is intensifying like this
KenPoirier KenPoirier Sep 13
Jeeze girl... About to go into her rainman impersonation. I've never seen a kid want to go to school so badly in my life
This is an intriguing start. I also really liked the conflict of the driver liking his job but recognizing what it did to his childhood home. It instantly gave him personality.
There's clearly something going on with Hanna she doesn't want her dad to know. I wonder if the limo has anything to do with the mysterious drowned girl.
KenPoirier KenPoirier Sep 22
You might want to add something here about her being excited to see Olivia after the summer or something.