Don't Lie to Me

Don't Lie to Me

9.9K Reads 136 Votes 18 Part Story
Redsoxrulemysox By Redsoxrulemysox Updated Dec 30, 2011

Elle isn't a normal teenager. She hears voices, voices lying to her, to everyone. She doesn't know what makes her different from everyone else, but these voices have become part of her. When she hears a voice saying "Don't lie to me" she knows she isn't alone. She meets Mikhail a seemingly normal teenager boy who has a secret of his own. They grow closer until Elle encounters her father who left her and her mother before she was born. He says there is something special about her, that she isn't normal. He tells her to be careful, that she can't trust anyone. All of the sudden Elle's life starts to change, somethings for the better, and some things, not so much.

Mugelbbub28 Mugelbbub28 Jan 03
Oh....My God! this is absolutely amazing! So beautifully written....cheesy I know. Lol
heartsofthedamned heartsofthedamned Apr 11, 2011
beautiful. absolutely beautiful.
                              The begining has a wonderful hook. :)
                              The world needs more writers like you.
Wotchy Wotchy Mar 17, 2011
Hey :) I loveeeee your story so far :) I voted and am obviously commenting :) I put this on my library. It really is good :) update more
liliana55 liliana55 Feb 23, 2011
where do u come up with these names?!?! :) also u have a few typos :) but i like this story a lot its all creepy and mysterious :)
mizzminibetty mizzminibetty Feb 21, 2011
same here i lurvee ur writing
                              can u give me some feedback on my book
                              never to be shown
                              its only one page
                              i just made it 2 dayz ago
                              thnx
                              
CarmaStories CarmaStories Feb 21, 2011
I love your writing style, can you give me feedback on the first chapter of my book I just wrote please?