Cousin B.

Cousin B.

509 Reads 72 Votes 19 Part Story
Regina Saint Claire By exlibrisregina Completed

My father kept a terrible secret from us: another child he had hidden away for seventeen years.  Now, "Cousin B." has moved into our home and is taking over my life.

  • chicklit
  • completed
  • drama
  • featured
  • gothic
  • melodrama
  • murder
  • mystery
  • mystery-thriller
  • novella
  • suspense
  • teen
  • teendrama
  • teenfiction
  • thriller
  • youngadult
I like your story, it's very original and makes me want to keep reading, which I will.
JenniClarke7 JenniClarke7 3 days ago
I feel her emotional confusion over B, but where is her grief? Her Dad and Doris have just died. is there a funeral? have I missed something?
JenniClarke7 JenniClarke7 4 days ago
Very dramatic start. I wonder why she had the fit, an allergic reaction? I like the unanswered questions and the dry, cold way her mother tells her about her 'cousin' .
thumandgloom thumandgloom 7 days ago
Wow so much unspoken drama in this chapter...the untold histories of the families and circumstances of Doris and fathers death and injustice done to B all interestingly hidden under the consciousness of a self obsessed teen. Look forward to the drama breaking out.
Aurora808 Aurora808 Nov 05
A good chapter getting to know M's friends. I thought everyone loved super hero movies lol!
stargurl267 stargurl267 6 days ago
"No tingles in the backseat" 😂😁 I know him as Tingles now lol