Running that's all I've been doing for 2 years with my little sister and a friend.  I'm the most wanted rogue in the world I haven't been all around the world but there are packs after me.  Our usual day running until we get caught by a pack what would happen when I find my mate the ALPHA... <3

  • adventure
  • alpha
  • realistic
  • revenge
  • rogue
  • romance
  • secrets
  • teen-fiction
  • war
  • werewolf
kristasaur kristasaur Feb 14, 2016
Wow! I've never seen anyone do anything like this.I already know these terms but it's good for people who don't! *claps* bravo
Wh1t3Cray0n Wh1t3Cray0n Mar 13, 2016
I love the plot and all, but the whole thing kinda sounds like your rushing or rambling. Plus there are still a few noticeable grammar mistakes....
Catycougor Catycougor Jun 03, 2016
I've always wondered what a mate mark looks like... any ideas?
Wolfy0001 Wolfy0001 Nov 21, 2016
Hold the freaking phone!!!!!
                              A group of WOLVES(you never said werewolves so i CAN and WILL correct you) needs: The Alpha pair(the Alpha Male & Alpha Female), The Betas, Omegas("Third in command"s DON'T exist), and of course the mid-ranking wolves.
PaigeIsAweSome124 PaigeIsAweSome124 Apr 15, 2016
Really cool except beta's and third in command are sometimes chosen by the alpha once they become alpha they could be like a brother or best friend otherwise wow you have your own glossary and great story
- - Nov 24, 2015
I love the plot and the fact you have told us about her past so we can understand her actions in future chapters however you have some very noticeable
                              Grammar errors witch I think you can improve