Forget Me Not [ON HOLD]

Forget Me Not [ON HOLD]

1.9K Reads 49 Votes 8 Part Story
RosemarieHathaway By RosemarieHathaway Updated Dec 24, 2011

In fear for her life after her mother's sudden death, Francesca is on the run with her aunt, Catherine, constantly changing their identities and homes to stay hidden away from society. But when her aunt develops an incurable disease, impossible love is never far away in the face of danger. And ultimately dreams of being free must compete with the bonds of a lifetime.

RosemarieHathaway RosemarieHathaway Aug 30, 2011
@jakeychan It's a prologue, and not a chapter, so the fast pace sort of suits it
Jacob_Acaryn Jacob_Acaryn Jul 02, 2011
love it so far, but the story goes a little fast paced. but overall, everything is great! nice story
SunnyDeLioncourt SunnyDeLioncourt Feb 07, 2011
i don't like that stepfather but i love your stories!! :D vote
RosemarieHathaway RosemarieHathaway Feb 06, 2011
@ashleighjayne Oh definitely a draft. There's just going to be a watty awards thing and I jut needed to get the story up and hopefully everyone will vote and 'like' like crazy :D But yeah, I wrote this up really quickly with no draft whatsoever. don't worry, I have plenty to work on :D
ashleighjayne ashleighjayne Feb 06, 2011
Interesting so far.
                              You need to read the first paragraph again, its a little wordy?
                              In the first sentence you've used 'usually' twice, for example.
                              Is this the final product or just a draft?
ashleighjayne ashleighjayne Feb 06, 2011
Interesting so far.
                              You need to read the first paragraph again, its a little wordy?
                              In the first sentence you've used 'usually' twice, for example.
                              Is this the final product or just a draft?