Cinder ( on hold)

Cinder ( on hold)

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NDC By UnknowAsLife Updated Mar 23, 2014

Cinder was not like other girl. She did not want to princes. No she want to be a Knight since a very young age she learn how to shot a arrow, make a sword and ride a horse. The black smith son, the  stable boy, and her mentor a crazy old knight help her to do this.                          

 She was starting a legend by trying to become a knight but not just a simple knight. No, she wanted to be a knight that guards the king. However, everything get turned up side down when she leaves the orphanage and little sue, a 7 year old girl who looks up to Cinder, follows her out of the orphanage and into the real world. While a woman and a child be able to survive in a time like this? Will Cinder be able to live her dream?  Or make a other one ?

  • cinderella
  • dreams
  • evil
  • knight
  • love
  • magic
  • secrets
  • twisted
Soridida Soridida Jan 11, 2015
I love it! How did you got that idea?
                              I wish that even I know how to write as you!!!
Ashestodust17 Ashestodust17 Jul 24, 2014
Hey this is great! You've got some pretty neat writing skills! Mind chekcing out my book too? Its called Her Special Someone and I'm looking for more comments and reads! hehe keep up the good work though! :D
TroylerLarry_14 TroylerLarry_14 May 16, 2014
I love this!! it reminds me kind of like Cinderella!! but so much more better!!!