TUX wants out. She's lived in a lab for the 15 years of her life, and she still isn't very 'powerful'. And she knows what happens to kids who aren't 'powerful' enough...
Another chapter? Please? Thought you had big plans for TUX.
this is really really cool... and interesting... i definitely want to read more!
This is very good! I enjoy the style that X writes in although, it seems a tad too refined for an experiment stilling trying to hold a conversation and walk straight. There are a few holes poked (how'd she learn about bubble gum, etc.), but this story has a lot of potential. Keep at it!
THIS IS SO COOL. I love the title!! It's really good so far and you should totally write more!!!