Angles Cry

Angles Cry

389 Reads 7 Votes 1 Part Story
neonsky2blueangel By neonsky2blueangel Updated Feb 07, 2011

In 1936 the government thought that the world was going to end in 2012, so they started a business called the Hunt to create the perfect super human. The Hunt is a place under ground that has colleted the greatest mines to make experiments. They would take some of the young orphans from the orphanage. They found Angle in a orphanage in New York, she was vary small for her age which was 4 at the time, no one notice when Hunt took her. At the age 12 angle is clarified an experiment Angle,she looks, acts, and talks like a human, but with some super powers. 2 years later a scientist went crazy and kidnapped Angle to try and do more risky experiment on her. One night a strange boy comes and saves her, she has never seen a teenage boy so when he falls for her, she is confused as to what she wants. To top it off the same people who created her are trying to get her back.

yulu1997 yulu1997 Jan 01, 2013
@AsianNinja3 (About the first tip) Don't get me wrong it was really good! Just it would be better if it had more detail. :)
neonsky2blueangel neonsky2blueangel Feb 07, 2011
Ok i so HAPPY normaly when i read other people's story's and they only have like 10 reads and are happy about it. Now i understand why there so happy 8 PEOPLE READ MY STORY now if they COMMENT that would be Great so i could make it BETTER. 
neonsky2blueangel neonsky2blueangel Feb 07, 2011
Ok i'm looking at this for the first time and it is really short im sorry next time ill make it longer, in my journal (yes i have a journal) it was 4 pages long front and back. So i hope you like it and by the way i have realy realy crappy spelling so just..... i dont know but im sorry for that 2!