Yeral: Short Story

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Cobloro By Cobloro Completed
Yeral and Rio are elite government agents; they were assigned by Bill Darsen to protect the Mayor; Pastor Alvin. Suspicions were raised that Alvin was possibly the cities most notorious serial killer; and even responsible for the deaths of some of Bill Darsens special team. The service ended with Yeral shooting the Mayor, as well as his partner in the hand; who was unaware why Yeral was attempting to take down the Mayor. Rio missed out on any compensation, and was left only with a grudge.  With top cop Darsen running for control of the city, he’s made taking down drug syndicates his first priority, and in the process of his new mission he has neglected to keep a closer eye on those under him.
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)
@IgpayAtinlay Wow, thanks! Oh really? I feel like my writing has change slightly also for some reason, but as long as it is good. Haha yeah, I am pretty bad at punctuation, I really need to work on that. Definitely PM the errors, because believe or not, I actually tried to edit this before posting, see how bad I am? I feel good that I pumped this story out, it was one of the first I actually printed out and read to myself, and was not self loathing...I enjoyed my own writing! self-absorbed now?  Just the whole process was fun, making the cover (it is not flash, but I like it...and even the summary! I think that is the first time it has been uploaded with the story.) 
                                    
                                    And Rio won't be appearing...Bill is one of my favourite characters, yet I have never explored him yet. His time will come...maybe.  
                                    
                                    *high fives back* Thank you. Good to see a comment from you ;)