Yeral: Short Story

Yeral: Short Story

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Cobloro By Cobloro Completed

Yeral and Rio are elite government agents; they were assigned by Bill Darsen to protect the Mayor; Pastor Alvin. Suspicions were raised that Alvin was possibly the cities most notorious serial killer; and even responsible for the deaths of some of Bill Darsens special team. The service ended with Yeral shooting the Mayor, as well as his partner in the hand; who was unaware why Yeral was attempting to take down the Mayor. Rio missed out on any compensation, and was left only with a grudge.  With top cop Darsen running for control of the city, he’s made taking down drug syndicates his first priority, and in the process of his new mission he has neglected to keep a closer eye on those under him.

Cobloro Cobloro Sep 22, 2012 11:22AM
@LiEcuBabe2nv Dirty Money. @magixinreading No doubt. @xXdemolitionloverXx There will be sequels! Thanks I like the trip they took to.
Naarah Naarah Aug 07, 2012 06:13AM
Woohoo! Nice!
                                    Looking forward to seeing Yeral in DM!
                                    Go get them!
Cobloro Cobloro Aug 07, 2012 05:15AM
@lilly-rain Thank you, and it does. Clarified it up also gave a sneaky intro to the new character from DM chapter ;) You know what? He might...he just might.
lilly-rain lilly-rain Aug 07, 2012 01:56AM
@ThomasBerryman Oooooh, love the new extra bit you added! Makes more sense now and clears a few things up - so happy with the ending! Does he ever find out who the two corrupt officers are??
Cobloro Cobloro Jul 25, 2012 04:55AM
@CorryBland Thanks you! Paul is alive Yeral saved him. I suggest Dirty Money i had no idea you read Paul.
CorryBland CorryBland Jul 24, 2012 09:27PM
I like it..now get to writting more please! ,lol and I have a question ..did the character Paul Lantar die?..if not are you going to write more about him?..and are their anymore stories similar to A Dangerous Mind???..Thanks