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Eden [Poetry] [Complete]

Eden [Poetry] [Complete]

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Tis my mind dump By zach_becker Completed

Previously titled 'Bad Thoughts', Eden is a poetry series that tells the story of a broken man's journey around The Garden of Eden; where fools and heathens are forever mourning. There, he learns that Eden may just be empty.

After his journey, he tells the unique and sometimes bizarre stories of those he had met during his travels. Some of these stories are horror-oriented.

[Parts 0-6 are a cultural critique. You are more than welcome to provide your own insight in the comments]

  • bizarre
  • dark
  • depression
  • eden
  • gods
  • greek
  • horror
  • mythology
  • new
  • poem
  • poems
  • poetry
  • religion
The_word_dream The_word_dream Aug 07, 2017
I hope it's OK to ask... who or what is the dove? 
                              Is it  people in general who like to judge others or is it God?
                              
                              Also I really liked the Greek God references.
                              
                              And the line about helping each other and hence making Eden.