Living with 6 Hot Brothers

Living with 6 Hot Brothers

112K Reads 3.8K Votes 35 Part Story
Kirsti By kirstijls24 Completed

this story is about a girl who loses her mum and dad! she ends up living with Hannah her mums best friend and her 6 boys!! Tori knows Carter and Leon but she ends up getting to know the rest of the boys!! Tori loves causing mischief but everything changes when her parents died! People start showing up and Tori needs to find a way to save everyone! Will she do it or will she be the changed girl she says she is

moanasaurus moanasaurus Nov 05, 2017
I think you should make the chapters longer and show more emotion, it kind of seems like she was just like "yup, my parents died, Ill just go pack up my stuff and hope to be a better person in the future"
prabanj prabanj Sep 23, 2017
The description of her emotions were not displaying her emotions .she just came there ,saw her parents,cried,packed up for Miami...it was like ...yeah I just left cuz my parents passed away
rebel_bluestarr rebel_bluestarr Mar 24, 2017
So far I like it but I just love books like these in general
hiimannaw hiimannaw Jan 10, 2017
I like it but I don't like the cover that much. Maybe six guys then one girl in the middle. I think that would hook the readers attention.♡
Juliuuuhhh_ Juliuuuhhh_ Jan 10, 2017
Side not you should alter it to be "he us in the way to prison as we speak" because it would be almost impossible if the crime was just committed... Just an FYI but I can't wait to read more!
kirstijls24 kirstijls24 Aug 08, 2015
Adrian and Matthew are twins. jake isn't? jake is 6 and the other two are 15?