Broken

Broken

724 Reads 12 Votes 4 Part Story
NastasiaJem By NastasiaJem Updated Feb 13, 2011

Abigail Parker is a 16 year old girl. She lives in a little house in Miami. Abigail and her dad do everything together but when her dad receives a letter he has to go away. Her whole life is changed completely. Can she handle it or will she eventually come to her breaking point?

NastasiaJem NastasiaJem Feb 15, 2011
@silverwolf97 Thank you I'm sorry I thought I already said thanks. :D
NastasiaJem NastasiaJem Feb 11, 2011
@silverwolf97 I apologize thank you so much I'm glad you thought it was funny
NastasiaJem NastasiaJem Feb 08, 2011
@shelbylw03 How do you make a slide show of pictures i've been at this for over an hour. could u please tell me or show me it would help a bunch :D
NastasiaJem NastasiaJem Feb 08, 2011
@shelbylw03 yeah i looked him up and i thought he looked just how i imagined. :D Thanks for reading
                              
silverwolf97 silverwolf97 Feb 08, 2011
good chapter. i liked the nightmare, it was funny. also i think u should only single space throughout the story. where u chose to space was great just try single spacing. good story.
silverwolf97 silverwolf97 Feb 08, 2011
my sis told me to come read this, and i have to say i really like it so far