Caught Between Worlds

Caught Between Worlds

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Kyla By Kyril_Racette Updated Sep 16, 2017

She awoke, her eyes adjusting to the warm light and cool breeze. The sky flecked with white and gold. Her head hurt immensely. And then a name came to her mind. Mia. My name is Mia.

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Mia awakens with no identity, no sense of who she is, and no sense of where she is. It's just an endless pink field with waterfalls and flowers, some birds and hills. It's a confusing life, wondering who she is, and then she hits an immovable sphere, something in her way from the answers. Mia is trapped in a dome, among thousands of endless worlds, and she finds herself caught between

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Vietyolophan Vietyolophan Sep 11, 2017
Nice writing! However, the only flaw I spot is the structure which I suggest you make more consistent. Good job though!