He Belongs to the Tamaz Twins

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KingOfTheExplicit By KingOfTheExplicit Completed
Elijah and Isaiah have their sights set on adorable little Kacer. 
    Elijah and Isaiah are twin models. Everyone swoons at the sight of of them but Kacer and they plan on changing that real soon. They plan of breaking down his defenses and have him coming to them willingly.
    Kacer is older than the twins and he doesn't fancy models. They're a little too into themselves or so he thinks. So it begs the question......
    Who's willpower is stronger the twins' or Kacer's?
She probably might add it in the book later on, but probably kept this description for those who might forget eg. me
I actually like this info @ the beginning because if I forget what the characters look like I can go back to the descriptions.
I think you should practice showing not telling because you describing the character takes away from the book you could include bits of this information in the book to keep people entirtaibd
I KNEW THIS WAS FAMILIAR! I was about to report you cuz i read YaoiMinx's one shots when i read the prologue but then when i read this im like SO SO SO HAPPYYYYY!! sorry though about thinking about reporting you to YaoiMinx... BTW HOW'DYA GET HER PERMISSION?!?!
dear author.. 
                                    super duper love this story..
                                    im glad you that you've put it back on wattpad..
                                    thank you soooooo much...
So  will u be repaying the story in it Entirty on here again. Bc i loved it